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Brilliant!

I really liked it, the peice by Yann Tiersen really fitted in well, with its bitter sweet melody. I think that the crayon drawings were a very good idea and although it was short, gave the story a bit of substance.

5/5 Faved.

Really Good

Animation was top notch, but I just felt there could have been more to it.

4'd

Good, but...

...The sound effects we're really annoying, and a bit delayed. It was a good idea, and well animated, but the sounds were kinda annoying.

4/5

We do not need more of these games.

There are already thousands of these games, ad each one is as bad as the last. They are not fun, they have not been well made, they are not challenging or even difficult. The graphics were terrible, you hadn't even attempted to create a real menu.

Change the controls.

My advice to yo is to change the controls, because at the moment, everytime I attack 5 times, I get a window popping up asking if I would like to enable stick keys.

The art on the people was quite good, but some of the backgrounds could be improved.

Text needs to be bigger.

You need to make the text in the story mode bigger as it is very hard to read, especially as you haven't used a simple font.
I'd also recommend you shorten the smmary of the story. I know you said it was long, but it is a bit too long and a lot of people will lose interest.
Animation could've been alot better for the beginning cut scene as well as he didn't even move at all.

Mute buttons are ALWAYS good additions to a flash. If someone doesn't like the music or sounds you've used and they can't turn it off without quitting the game, its very likely they'll do just that.

Overall, a good starting point, but needs a bit more work and fine tuning.

Great solo, But...

I'd say your guitar needs a much better tone. The distortion really doesn't suit the song, i'd suggest a more bluesy style tone with much less distortion. The solo itself and the tune were superb, sounded very Jimi Hendrix, but the tone really let it down. A wah pedal would be a great addition to this.

A little tip, instead of keeping your guitar centered, if you copy the guitar track, and pan one heavily to the left and another heavily to the right, you get a much better sound and quality.

Absolutley amazing!

i loved all the zelda music and this is just great!
it was stuck in my head all day!

Great!

Great song, kinda reminded me of Sum41, whether you think thats a good thing, i don't know, but for me it is. I think the chorus was possibly the best part of the song, i just really liked to general composition of it! The screaming at 2:10 was well done, unlike some others i've heard that sounds more like someone sneezing on the mike. Well Done!